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IlseFr
Hi there,

How's everybody doing? My name is Ilse and I live in Amsterdam. A couple of months ago I started the website www.temploola.com. I offer digital templates in Microsoft Word for free. Think of wedding invitations, birth announcements, resume templates, business card templates, printable weekly planners, etc.

If you don't have a lot to do at the moment, can you please review my website and let me know what you think about it?
I think the style of the landingspage (e.g. wedding invitations or wedding save-the-dates) is better than my homepage, but not sure HOW to change it.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me!

Cheers from Amsterdam!

Ilse
Darin McGrew
White text on a pink or other light-colored background is hard to read.

And pop-ups suck.
IlseFr
QUOTE(Darin McGrew @ Nov 21 2017, 04:23 PM) *

White text on a pink or other light-colored background is hard to read.

And pop-ups suck.


Hi Darin,

Thanks for the feedback! Just changed the white text and also the header on the homepage. What do you think about it like this?

Cheers, Ilse
pandy
Much better. Don't notice any pop-ups. Did you remove them too?

One thing though. The first text section on each page is centered while the rest of the text has normal alignment. Centered text is the most hard to read and to be honest it looks a little amateurish. The first is a known fact, the second is my opinion.;-)
If you want to make it different from the text and look centered you could maybe make the whole block a little more narrow than the rest and center it, but let the text within it have normal alignment. Just a thought.
thematrix
Love the design of the webpage, I don't know why it is not working on my phone though. Is it adjusted, has anyone else tried it?
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