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| ryo128 |
 Aug 23 2007, 10:54 PM
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This is a very new social networking site www.buddienet.com
Here is a preview of what's inside my site: Free Arcade Games. Free Streaming TV Free Download Area A Community Media Center Articles I am looking forward for comments to improve my site, please feel free to comment. Thanks. ryo This post has been edited by ryo128: Aug 23 2007, 10:58 PM |
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| Peter Evans |
Aug 24 2007, 12:03 AM
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Try fixing the piles of HTML errors first.
As for the content, I'm afraid I doze off when I see stuff like The best part is...YOU keep all the profits you make from selling these. How can you loose??? These great money making products are available to our registered members only. Having two or more "!" or "?" is preteenish, and your word is spelled "lose", not "loose" (which is an adjective). |
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| ryo128 |
Aug 24 2007, 02:00 AM
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QUOTE(Peter Evans @ Aug 24 2007, 01:03 PM)  Try fixing the piles of HTML errors first. As for the content, I'm afraid I doze off when I see stuff like The best part is...YOU keep all the profits you make from selling these. How can you loose??? These great money making products are available to our registered members only. Having two or more "!" or "?" is preteenish, and your word is spelled "lose", not "loose" (which is an adjective). Heehee, thanks for your feedback. Really is helpful. I will try to polish up my english. How can i make you don't doze off? Please give me a suggestion? As for the html errors, i will ask someone to help me because i do not know how to fix it. ryo |
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| Darin McGrew |
Aug 24 2007, 11:20 AM
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WDG Member Group: Root Admin Posts: 8,365 Joined: 4-August 06 From: Mountain View, CA Member No.: 3 |
Please see the FAQ entry Where can I learn about HTML?
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