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Posted by: IlseFr Nov 21 2017, 09:38 AM

Hi there,

How's everybody doing? My name is Ilse and I live in Amsterdam. A couple of months ago I started the website https://www.temploola.com/. I offer digital templates in Microsoft Word for free. Think of wedding invitations, birth announcements, resume templates, business card templates, printable weekly planners, etc.

If you don't have a lot to do at the moment, can you please review my website and let me know what you think about it?
I think the style of the landingspage (e.g. https://www.temploola.com/wedding-invitation-templates/ or https://www.temploola.com/wedding-save-the-date-templates/) is better than my homepage, but not sure HOW to change it.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me!

Cheers from Amsterdam!

Ilse

Posted by: Darin McGrew Nov 21 2017, 10:23 AM

White text on a pink or other light-colored background is hard to read.

And pop-ups suck.

Posted by: IlseFr Nov 22 2017, 10:33 AM

QUOTE(Darin McGrew @ Nov 21 2017, 04:23 PM) *

White text on a pink or other light-colored background is hard to read.

And pop-ups suck.


Hi Darin,

Thanks for the feedback! Just changed the white text and also the header on the homepage. What do you think about it like this?

Cheers, Ilse

Posted by: pandy Nov 22 2017, 10:20 PM

Much better. Don't notice any pop-ups. Did you remove them too?

One thing though. The first text section on each page is centered while the rest of the text has normal alignment. Centered text is the most hard to read and to be honest it looks a little amateurish. The first is a known fact, the second is my opinion.;-)
If you want to make it different from the text and look centered you could maybe make the whole block a little more narrow than the rest and center it, but let the text within it have normal alignment. Just a thought.

Posted by: thematrix Feb 13 2018, 10:19 AM

Love the design of the webpage, I don't know why it is not working on my phone though. Is it adjusted, has anyone else tried it?

Posted by: Christian J Oct 6 2020, 10:39 AM

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